She Fixed To Be A Heroine

A very hurtful look at those addicted to heroin

She fixed to be a heroine

She fixed to be a heroine
call it tar, smack or heroin
It submerged her in ecstasy 
And in every fantasy bliss
She felt like a heroine
with every passing fix
Undefeated in her mind
Transformed with time
high and high she climbed

She fixed to be a heroine
Call it smack, tar, or heroin
She thought she was
a sweet cherubim 
With every passing fix
Higher and higher-- She was
Soon to became a Saraphim
Yet they found her lying in 
a ditch.

Reviews

[Jack Kennedy]

I like the ending with her dying to show a faster road to death is the result of using drugs. I don't do drugs and it's good to find others who don't either. 8.9/10

[Honey-Bee]

Thanks Jack! I don't do drugs I just have seen some who have struggled with them and this poem helps people understand the horrible effect they have on a soul.

[Lifeofbennard]

She fixed to be a heroine yet they found her in a ditch.
I enjoy the concept.
Bravo

[Honey-Bee]

Thanks Lifeoflemen!

[Lifeofbennard]

Welcome (:

[Kenaz]

Sad words, but true...a good rhyming scheme here

[Honey-Bee]

Thanks Kenaz! My goal is to help people see how terrible drugs can be making people believe they are a heroine when they fix with heroin.