True Loves Abode

True Loves Abode

A Poem by Honey-Bee

True Loves Abode

My heart is my true loves abode
For on me his love he has bestowed

Flowers in the day he sends
From the heavens above he descends 
 
Only to catch a glimpse of his eye
before he rode off to the sky

To catch for us the stars that shine
So in the light we might dine

I am his and he is mine
Tonight we will dance until we shine

For me he sends the ocean blue
To splash in the tides so lovely and true

His spirit descends on me as sweet love potion
As we splash our feet in the ocean

Wrapped in the warmth of his embrace
Nothing can disrupt our eyes gazing face to face 

For I am his and he is mine
And into the night we do shine

© 2014 Honey-Bee


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A beautiful poem for love.
"For I am his and he is mine
And into the night we do shine"
I like the above lines. So simple and needed. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Honey-Bee

9 Years Ago

Thanks Coyote Poetry!
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Sublime love poem that shows your admiration and such to another. While I am one not to use ownership in regards to relationships, I still see the point you are making (personal bias). Wonderful yet again - keep it up.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Honey-Bee

10 Years Ago

Thanks Wynter!
This is amazing poem keep up the great work and keep them coming

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Honey-Bee

10 Years Ago

Thanks Melissa!
melissa

10 Years Ago

Your welcome
Romantic to the depth and width. Excellent...:)...............

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Honey-Bee

10 Years Ago

Thanks Sami!
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)................
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Sky
So romantic..Loved it..Great rhyming by the way. :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Honey-Bee

10 Years Ago

Thanks Sky!
Sky

10 Years Ago

Thats alright.It was really good :-)
Such a romantic and sweet poem. :-) :-D

Kaze~

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Honey-Bee

10 Years Ago

Thanks Kaze!
♔ CrownedDevil ☾

10 Years Ago

Your very welcome. :-)
such a pleasurable read filled with emotion!! And such a wonderful flow and rhythm.
A fantastic piece!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Honey-Bee

10 Years Ago

Thanks Kiera!
Good job here makes me want to make some more of my love poems but I can't for now. Thanks for the good read and keep up the good writing!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Honey-Bee

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the nice words of encouragement!
A story to be told of a love transcending. You filled this piece with much emotion and visual appeal. Hats off for a great write.

Thanks for sharing.

Rob.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Honey-Bee

10 Years Ago

Thanks Rob!

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Honey-Bee

Ventura , CA



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