Annabel Lee Part Two

Annabel's point of view poem

I needed love, and so I believed
love needed me. 
Love in the form of 

cold hands
soft touch
caring eyes
Love in the form of him.
Indeed he did.

And it was no angels above, no demons below us
that separated our 

souls

hearts

bodies

minds

It was the rooting breath of Death
which cursed our
Kingdom by The Sea

And our love
that was more than love
never stopped
Unlike our hearts.

Little hearts that craved for love arts.

Author's Note

An idea that randomly popped up in my head.

Reviews

[joeysick]

Hello! I run an Instagram account that promotes the work of others, I am in love with this piece and was wondering if I’d be able to post it *you will be credited of course*

[Simon Welsh]

To quote Billy Corgan "Love 'solves' everything".

[Zach]

It is a dark love poem that compliments Poe's very well. Such a great idea. "I needed love, and so I believed
love needed me.". My favorite line.

[burnhouse]

Thank you, Zach. It's an amazing feeling when someoneeven has their favourite line.

[Blank]

"And this maiden she lived with no other thought
Then to love and be loved by me"

I really enjoyed this, you captured much of the same feel as Poe's original in this, I love the idea that it's from her point of view. Thank you for sharing.

[burnhouse]

Thank you. I've read much of his work recently and I just had to write something like this. :)

[annabellee]

Loved it, such a great idea to write it in her point of view.
Just brilliant, really.
Well done :)

[burnhouse]

Thank you. :) I noticed you use the name Anabell Lee here.

[annabellee]

yeah
it's my favourite poem ;)