Portrait of mother

Portrait of mother

A Poem by Mary Helda
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feeling alittle sad

"
"I love you," you echoed;

With a mellifluous voice

That is tautly bound to my heart-

It still lingers in my mind,

So magical

So real

So soft

So pure

your voice ; those words-

My treasure

My Portrait of you.

© 2016 Mary Helda


Author's Note

Mary Helda
I didnt exactly intend to write down a powerful poem,just the way i am feeling in very few words

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/"I love you," you echoed;

With a mellifluous voice

That is tautly bound to my heart-

It still lingers in my mind/

the mother echoes the child's love - how sweet like honey - and that memory has a strength to bind the heart to such a loving and lovingly shared memory!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Helda

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much..i really do appreciate it:-)
Solar

8 Years Ago

You are welcome!



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The place of mother and father in heart ,is really tough to write on a paper..sorry that you are missing your mother..every sorrow memory leaves us with depression but except of parents..because even their memories give us strength and support ,,may be due to their purest ,never ending love for us which we can never find in this world after..
it is just heart touching ,Mary..

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amazing words for dear mother.
"your voice ; those words-
My treasure
My Portrait of you. "
The description soft and powerful. Thank you Mary for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Helda

8 Years Ago

thank you so much
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome dear Mary.
Such intense emotions, such a powerful poem, this is a truly wonderful poem. I felt your pain, even if it's slight and to bear such love for your loved ones is truly a testament to love itself.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Helda

8 Years Ago

Thank you my darling:-)
The emotions in this one are intense. I can feel your sadness. I am sorry you are missing your mom.....I know how that feels. Lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Helda

8 Years Ago

Its okay,it'll get better with time..thank you so much for your kind words..i really do sppreciate i.. read more
Powerful indeed, I couldn't think of a better testament to motherhood than what you have written here. This is the kind of poem I would like to see on a mothers day card, Standing Ovation! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Helda

8 Years Ago

Oh my!!!! thank you so much,you are too kind...i really do appreciate it
/"I love you," you echoed;

With a mellifluous voice

That is tautly bound to my heart-

It still lingers in my mind/

the mother echoes the child's love - how sweet like honey - and that memory has a strength to bind the heart to such a loving and lovingly shared memory!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Helda

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much..i really do appreciate it:-)
Solar

8 Years Ago

You are welcome!
Pretty sure I'm going to like all of your poetry
Tight, neat, powerful. Perfect.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Helda

8 Years Ago

Thank you...i really appreciate it
*hearts drops* This melts me entirely! this is so beautiful! it's like it's forever frozen D: *exhales* It's beyong gorgeous darling. *covers mouth*

Posted 8 Years Ago


CiNtsaLis

8 Years Ago

*beyond* (chuckles*) Is there a DELETE option? *laughs* (hides from embarrassment) >.< Oh no, it pre.. read more
Mary Helda

8 Years Ago

hahahaha *laughs*..there is no delete button but we could enter "beyong* in our secret dictionary..d.. read more
Mary Helda

8 Years Ago

hahaha...most definately:-):-)
AHHH. It is sad when loved ones pass on. I had to look up the word, 'mellifluous'. What a lovely word ... clever you!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Helda

8 Years Ago

thank you:-)..i like learning new,words too
for me it is powerful...lost my mother over a year and a half ago---that final portrait---in my mind always stayed young.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mary Helda

8 Years Ago

i am sorry about your loss.........and i am glad you have a clear portrait of her.. ..i have one of .. read more
CiNtsaLis

8 Years Ago

😱😨🤔 one secret dictionary coming right up 😁😊 "beyong" another word for hidden beauty .. read more

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Added on January 22, 2016
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Kampala, Christian, Uganda



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