The world would be a better place without

The world would be a better place without

A Poem by Maryam

Amplified sight
On the look out
For the next victim
Another exit
Another life gone
Forgotten
They all witnessed
None spoke
It's unfair
It's unnecessary
Just stop.

© 2012 Maryam


Author's Note

Maryam
I know the title is quite long, but I think it fits in well with the content. Read and review as you will.

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Good write .

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple but electric wihtin the bounds of words.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it :)
It's short but still contains a lot.
Very well written.
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Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think the title does the poem justice.....Well penned my friend......Whisk

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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