I Wrote a Poem.

Inspired by Title Fight's "Where Am I?"

Maybe there's nothing,

just an empty dream,

just an empty breath,

a whole society inside my own

mind where life and

sea stand as still as the land

and trees for fear

of moving forward. 

A flood.

After all these months

of feet stuck in the

mud--quicksand

to devour tired legs, hands

long since blistered from holding 

the rope yet have trouble letting go.

Maybe there's nothing, 

only this moment.

Reviews

[The They]

I love how you start with the line "Maybe there's nothing" and finally bring it back at the end in order to show how its meaning has changed (along with accenting it with the final line "only this moment". Good job. keep it up