The Secrets of Mice and Men
A Book by Matt G
 A war between mice and men stirs as the protagonist, Franklin Butler, is drafted into the army with his best friend and family servant Richard Templeton.  © 2010 Matt G
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Still in the works. Could really use some constructive criticism. And yes it is about rats.
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This has some unique style to it. I don't quite know what it is, but I like it. Plus, I just like the fact that it's centered on a group of talking rats. I'm hoping the reader is supposed to take that they are literally rats, otherwise I'll sure feel like a dumb. I would suggest maybe making some kind of break when the date in the story changes? It may make the whole thing easier to follow. Overall, I really liked it and hopefully there'll be more of it :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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This has some unique style to it. I don't quite know what it is, but I like it. Plus, I just like the fact that it's centered on a group of talking rats. I'm hoping the reader is supposed to take that they are literally rats, otherwise I'll sure feel like a dumb. I would suggest maybe making some kind of break when the date in the story changes? It may make the whole thing easier to follow. Overall, I really liked it and hopefully there'll be more of it :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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