Love

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Love

What is in joy and love?

Is it peace like a dove?

Is it trust like a circle?

A circle not bust?

Is it a promise that you keep?

Love is a heap

And love is a heat

one thing love need not

 is beat

Author's Note

do you think the last line should read
'is be beat'?

Reviews

[Nae Nae]

I think that though it is short and simple it is very honest and truthful. I personally understood what it meant but "is be beat" may be a better choice of words for those who don't understand what you are meaning by that last line. I loved this poem though, as I said short and simple yet honest and truthful.

Fantastic work.

Nae-Nae ...

[Aggie Skeleton]

Short, and to the point. It was very heartfelt.

[Bridget Mcmaken]

I Like this poem

[Ardeth Lane]

No, leave it as is beat. I think is be beat would sound a little...off.

[Water_the_Sun]

This piece i can understand.

Love cant be summed into words and i think that this expresses it perfectly

this line:
"one thing love need not is beat"

might read better if it were written:
"one thing love need not be is beat"

Love is a lot of things, love is honest to the point that it brusises you inside and beats you both to pieces but you rise from the ashes and keep going forward, its struggle, its sacrafice, its just as much give as it is get, its being best friends, best lovers, and keeping no secrets from each other, but holding feircly onto the secrets of your lover and locking them in the Pandora's box that is your heart.

Im going to have to favourite this poem. i LOVE it!

[~eVelyN fAiTh~]

I really like this poem

[Matthew Ian Herrawood W]

ok one more person too like is be beat and im changing it (at least untill i see my girl)

[Edalene Connell]

I think it would read better if it was "is be beat" but that is totally up to you. I liked it.