Our Time

Our world is buzzing. No one is young anymore.

All of us have a story to tell, whether it be sad or happy.

Many of us don't feel we should even belong in this world, for many feel it is full of ignorance.

I feel for them. We all have this feeling at least once in a while.

We feel as if our people don't have the time for any of us, that we don't make any impact on the world.

I strongly disagree.

We are here for a reason, my friends.

We were meant to live for more than we think.

All we have to do is believe.

Reviews

[James Jr]

I like how you've put this together. I wouln't have been able to do such a magnificent job!

[Chelsea]

Thank you for writing this, very uplifting!
I like the idea of "being here for reasons". It's a comforting thought to know that life has a bit more behind it than we know! Good message,
Something things to fix up! The third line is where you start losin' that flow. I know this is free verse, but still you need to maintain a bit of flow. So maybe fix up lines three and five!?!? These are really the only disjointed lines.....
As for line four. You use feel, feeling twice. Maybe put a different word in there. eg. touch, vibes, sensation..... Those words may work!
Very nice thoughts in this poem! I enjoyed reading!!