no more

My friend wrote it

May dreams be brought that I might reach...
The gentle strains of midnight speech....
And frozen stars that gild the forest floor....
and this is where I want to be no more.....

Author's Note

So this is a piece that my friend wrote and he would like to know what you think of it...please do review. Thanks

Reviews

[R Smith]

In my opinion Maumil its a lovely piece, the first line takes me to a land i often dream of, it does not exist but its in my head and that's what counts, the second line has me thinking of laying in bed at night and just whispering to a loved one of everything and anything, those frozen stars on the forest floor its the imagination in this that stretches my imagination and i love that feeling, this is where i want to be no more, indeed i don't, i want to be in that forest in my head that does not exist but is beautiful to see, so here we have four lines that create a magical story, i would tell your friend to continue writing as soon as possible for he/she has a gift to give us, thank you Maumil :)

[Maumil Mehraj]

Thanks so much Richard for the beautiful review you left...he would be very pleased :)

[R Smith]

you are very welcome Maumil :)

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beaiutful poetry... your friend should be writing more and should be sharing his gift with us...

[Maumil Mehraj]

Thanks very much! I'll convey your word.

[B]

I totally love this
Its a promise
Maybe to a lover

Its going into my library
Love it

[Maumil Mehraj]

Thanks for appreciating, Nisreenaa. He would be happy to know this :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

this is awesome.....
invite him over........to join the party!!!
:)

[Maumil Mehraj]

Hahaa...sure I will! :) Thanks Pushkar for reading

[Pushkar Prabhat]

my pleasure!!! :) :)