Best Bike Ride

Best Bike Ride

A Story by Maitrayee Dadhich

"Ren" a typical teenager, fought her mother for an insane reason. "You don't need bike for such a short distance.... The shop is only 3 blocks away" that's all she said. But in return he ended up hurting her heart with his brutal words.
In school they had a lecture regarding parents, their love and their sacrifices.
Mrs. Willow started the lecture
"What they are doing for their kids must not be misjudged as their duty. You all think that their sacrifices are nothing, they are just their duties.
But NO.... That's not it"
"Whatever "Ren sighed.
"You know what... If you were just their duty... They could have sent you to a boarding school when you were in 2nd / 3rd grade. But they didn't choose that.... They chose you. Your mother left her job for you, she choose to take care of you. "
Then after a short break she said "& that's all for today's lecture "
As soon as teacher left Sabi said "What a lame story.... So illogical... right Ren"
But he was shocked, tears were flowing out of Ren's eyes.
In evening, he prepared his bike to give a ride to most amazing person of his life.... His mother...
Although they ended up doing grocery shopping....
(ha ha ha) You could 've seen the expression on his face
(lol)

© 2017 Maitrayee Dadhich


Author's Note

Maitrayee Dadhich
Ignore grammar
Please give review it'll help me
Smile.... & THANKS for reading

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This is great, it shows the extent parents go to help their children as best they can even though to the children it may seem otherwise, with time we begin gaining humility and noticing why it is our parents do what they do for us, in the name of love. Great story, keep up the great work! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maitrayee Dadhich

7 Years Ago

Thanks for your review... It means a lot..... yup I'll try my best to write my best.... ☺



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Nice story,congratulation for writeup of story you may become great writer in the country as well as in the world

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nice story, congratulation for writeup, you may become a great writer in the the country as well as on the world world

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maitrayee Dadhich

7 Years Ago

Hehe.... Thanku... 😅😆
Nice story! I like how you keep it on a day to day base and don't go out of your way to show a crazy scenario. It adds in some peer presure with Sabi as well

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maitrayee Dadhich

7 Years Ago

Thanks for your review.... ☺
Wow.. Great story. You nicely focused on day to day life scenario where every teen's action somehow make their parents proud, happy and sometimes sad.
Keep it up 👍✍️


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maitrayee Dadhich

7 Years Ago

😄Thanks..
This is great, it shows the extent parents go to help their children as best they can even though to the children it may seem otherwise, with time we begin gaining humility and noticing why it is our parents do what they do for us, in the name of love. Great story, keep up the great work! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maitrayee Dadhich

7 Years Ago

Thanks for your review... It means a lot..... yup I'll try my best to write my best.... ☺

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Added on February 21, 2017
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Maitrayee Dadhich
Maitrayee Dadhich

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A new writer... want to convert my imagination and real life experiences into stories. Want to become a doctor and have two great hobbies -art(mainly sketching) -writing(only started a year ago) more..

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