Colour Blind

Colour Blind

A Poem by Mavis Bard

Why do you seem grim and dreary
Uninviting empty lonely
I try to read your eyes
But your colors have branded my mind
I act like I know
But I have nothing to show

Why are you so green
Why do you feel blue
All these colors I see
Mean nothing to you

Why do you feel downcast somber
Over-encumbered faintly breathing
I raise my head to the sky
Waiting for a sign
But all I get is grief
With no outlet for relief

Why are you so red
Why do you feel black
Was it something I said
Is it something I lack

All the colors ignite
And melt away
The sky tonight
Still no sight of you
I’ll destroy my eyes
For a glimpse of you
I’ll betray the light
Just to be with you

© 2008 Mavis Bard


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"I try to read 'you' eyes" should be 'your' instead.Other than that this is good.Very colorful indeed.It has a lot of emotions in it.So nicely done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Mavis Bard
Mavis Bard

Pittsburgh, PA



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