Letting Go

Letting Go

A Poem by Mary
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Jesus takes his first steps. Part of the "Mary" story.

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Letting Go

tiny hand slips from my finger

 “me do!” he boldly declares

 

pit-pat first step

he beams, I smile

pit-pat second step

 “me do?” “you do”

 

Pit-pat third step

thump- I reach…

“no! me do!”

up again pit-pat

 

 pit-pat, pit-pat, “me do! me do!”

Singing - chanting - laughing - marching

 

pit-pat goes my heart

learning to let go

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2013 Mary


Author's Note

Mary
Part of the "Mary" series of poems. Her first experience of having to let go as she encourages her child taking his first steps. Reviews welcome.

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I found this so sad...Mothers do have to learn to let go, but Mary had to learn so much more...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mary

11 Years Ago

thanks, Marie, you are right, It must have been a consolation to her that she had these very good mo.. read more
this brought a smile to my face thank you so much for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mary

11 Years Ago

thanks, Holly. baby's first steps are amazing!
Love this :) Do you remember my first steps? I can't remember hehe

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mary

11 Years Ago

i do! yes, like they were yesterday ;-) thanks, luvy
MaryBee

11 Years Ago

awe love you momma :)

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