To the cat, I saw today

The poem captures emotions when one replaces them with one who is similar looking to the poet and the poet regrets that they did not confess to the cat and now has to look at them with hopelessness

Bringing hope with little paws on the ground, those Little marble-like eyes and grace, whose Orbs are they finding to the right, instead of Me. There’s someone unseen above. Those eyes met another pair, they Communicated with no words, found a way. You’re with the similar cat, regretting I’m left again, that’s upsetting. The moment they met, the quiver Was disheartening. The orbs’ shimmer, Is bringing greys to the sky, you Look up to see with the new.

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

Language somewhat muddled but I suspect English is your second langage and thus this is a little muddled.
But I read your poem as a metaphor for cats catching sight of each other. Could be like human beings knowing and feeling the very same emotions. Once seen, not forgotten.

[Secretpoet]

thank you for this review, and yes, English is my second language. I'm trying to improve it by writing these little pieces of literature, Emma.

[June bug]

This is a very wonderful write

[Secretpoet]

thank you very much, June.