Distant.

Just another thought in my mind.

Why are you so close, yet so distant from me.

This feeling I cannot explain has consumed my every thought.

Can it be, that you don't really care? 

Maybe you just wish someone else was here. 

So that you can throw me away and be with her.

Not really caring, just living in a blur. 

Not looking forward to the future or what we could truly be.

But just living a life of pain and misery.

Reviews

[Walter Scott Morrison]

I hate that you hurt. Try using more metaphorical phrases. A lot of feeling can be expressed through comparison that way

[M]

I think we've all felt this at some point before. I think the poem could benefit from using a little more concrete imagery in addition to the abstract concepts of the future together and life in a blur. Well-done. :D

[Mackenzie Brooke]

A beautiful poem about heart break and loneliness we can all relate to that.
Nicely done! :)

[Rowen Cameron]

Brilliantly done. I totally empathise with you about this. You took an indescribable feeling and put it in words. Love it!

[Tasha]

This was amazing.