Caught

For contest 10/40. Words required: barrel, dam, cloaked, cross, friends, freedom, roll, foggy, stars, vents.

I barrel along the dam, running from the cloaked figure. If don't cross, I will lose my friends, and freedom. I trip and roll onto the cool concrete, my mind foggy as the stars blink through the smokey chimney vents.

Reviews

[Helena]

Yes......and then what happened! lol. You could expand on this, it made a great impact I thought as a beginning of a story! it was a great use of all the 'Ten" words. Thank you and good luck!

Helena

[angelina neves]

uau! lovely way to use the 10 words in 40 words!