To Feel

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I could feel it go dead inside of me.

I could feel it shut down and give up

                and huring me...

  Yet, I want to hold on

                              To keep going

                 but,

I felt it go dead

I felt my will fade.

        My hopes get crushed.

I felt my legs fail me and my arms flop uselessly to my sides.

I felt my tears fall, even though I could not hear my sobs.

                           But I knew I would hold on.

I felt the people closest to me drop dead.

I felt my feelings burst open and

I felt myself scream even though I could not hear.

        I´ve lived enough to feel most everything, but the one thing that hurt the most was....

    I could feel it go dead..

Reviews

[Megumi (L)]

I feel death. Not life.

[WriterMe]

Funny, I have a poem with the exact title. Except mine is more about living, feeling and life. Yours is the complete opposite and yet equally well written. The depth of it really holds true. Great job =]

--Niki

[Megumi (L)]

Arigato again. I wrote this in the middle of religion class. And I couldn�t finish it cuz I was about to scream so I finished it later.

[topsyturvy]

beautifully written..:)