Retrieval 9

What a tangled up mess that I weave,
Accomplishing all that I achieve,
As I break through all that I believe,
And the pieces of me I retrieve.

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

Accomplishing and achieve mean about the same thing, rendering that line relatively superfluous.

It's good though. I like it.

[Sleepless]

Very impressive! each time I read it presents new perspectives of how to view this poem