Retrieval 9

Retrieval 9

A Poem by Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks

What a tangled up mess that I weave,
Accomplishing all that I achieve,
As I break through all that I believe,
And the pieces of me I retrieve.

© 2017 Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks

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Accomplishing and achieve mean about the same thing, rendering that line relatively superfluous.

It's good though. I like it.

Posted 2 Years Ago

Very impressive! each time I read it presents new perspectives of how to view this poem

Posted 3 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on May 4, 2017
Last Updated on August 3, 2017


Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks
Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks

Fort Wayne, IN

I have been writing since I knew how. Before that I would just draw pictures to tell a story. My true passion is poetic lyrics. That is mostly what I am inspired to write. I have been dabbling in othe.. more..