Her eyes

Pretty girls.

I look up, 

And I see her. 

She's in my head 

So beautiful. 

Her hand on my neck, 

Is gentle and soft. 

Her voice in my ear 

Is low and hungry. 

If anything was love  

It would be her 

And me, beautifully, 

Forever.

Reviews

[Natasha]

Very well written, short and simple, but has a lot of meaning and passion!

[Mel Jayne]

Thank you!

[Gee]

Had I been born a woman, other women would have been my desire. Not for me a penis wielding fella with nowt but self satisfaction on his mind, and the farting and snoring, hmmmmm

[Jesus0996]

Wow, that poem was so lovely.

[Mel Jayne]

Thank you so much

[Zephyr]

Beautiful poem!
Simple yet powerful! I appreciate your approach.
Keep writing!

[Mel Jayne]

Thank you!

[Joey Nizz]

Beautiful work, I like this poem.
Good one Mel Jayne.

[Mel Jayne]

Thank you, I'm glad you think that.

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome.

[Island Hippy]

Aloha Mel Jayne, a flowing sensual piece. Just enough to begin the burn. Very nice. Izzy

[Mel Jayne]

Thank you so much.

[Island Hippy]

You're welcome

[Mr.Writer]

Very romantic, warm and exotic...
Very well done! :)

[Mel Jayne]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

[Sammie Sanchez]

awwwwwwwww, its so adorable and sweet. i like it

[Mel Jayne]

I'm glad you liked it.

[Sammie Sanchez]

your welcome

[Farhan Shaikh]

Romantic as well and interesting..
Good poem and very well penned.
Keep writing and sharing

[Mel Jayne]

Thank you, I'm glad you found i interesting.

[Wórdsmíth]

It's really a very sensuous but also a romantic poetry you've nailed down in words. Ev'n the pic. that you have attached along with it is absolutely gorgeous and helped me understand the depth of your words, deeply.

I'm sure would be looking forward to reading your work!

[Mel Jayne]

Thanks, Im glad you likrd it.