Why

Why

A Poem by Hopelessly Confused
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Out of my worst nightmare I became stronger.

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Why'd you do it?

You took my heart and tore it in two.

You deceived me and said you loved me.

I never wanted to be hurt.

I feared it.

I thought...

I thought we would be everlasting,

and now that it's finished,

I can never make up my mind.

I cry when I think about how badly you hurt me

and how I miss you.

You caused my worst break down

I tried my best not to show it.

I put on a smile and cried on the inside.

I'll even admit I had to numb myself from the tenderness.

You almost destroyed me.

And I wished I had never met you,

But I'm glad I did.

Because through all the tears, pain, lies

You made me stronger.

© 2009 Hopelessly Confused


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This poem is another good one. A lot of people have been through this. In this poem a lot of people can relate to it. You can feel the pain and the sadness coming from the poem. To put on a mask, and act like you're fine is really hard, but a lot of people do it. Well done =)

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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I like this poem a lot!
Really nicely written, the ending was great too!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Beautiful! I like the words you use to describe the pain you feel and the strength you have found because of the pain someone else caused.

Posted 10 Years Ago


It's definitely one of those live and learn deals. Your experiences make you learn from them and in essence become stronger. Nice work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Hm, I wasn't expecting the ending. and that's a good thing.
quite honestly, I thought it was going to be one of the usual "you hurt me, I hate you" rants, but you got my respect by taking a step forward and admitting the truth.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem is another good one. A lot of people have been through this. In this poem a lot of people can relate to it. You can feel the pain and the sadness coming from the poem. To put on a mask, and act like you're fine is really hard, but a lot of people do it. Well done =)

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I like it!! I think some word choice could be stronger, but the emotions were clear! Thats what makes a good poem a great poem! :) Good write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I can really relate to this one. I can feel the pain and suffering coming from the poem and can really tell that this person hurt you bad. Good job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 28, 2009
Last Updated on December 29, 2009
Tags: Strength, pain, tears, lies, rebirth

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Hopelessly Confused
Hopelessly Confused

Tallahassee, U.S. Virgin Islands



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I'm Melana, I love to write. It helps me keep sane. Can't go a day with out writing. Most my friends love to write so it's awesome. I love Reading- Mainly supernatural books, Writing- Anything just.. more..

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