To You:

To You:

A Poem by MelissaRocksDuhh
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About a recent ex-boyfriend. I hope you know how much you truly hurt me. & Here's a little something for you to think about.

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To You:

Your eyes did entice me;

brown pools of love.

Your eyes now disgust me;

windows peering into your evil soul.

 

Your voice did sound like an angel;

mellifluous and loving.

Your voice now makes me cringe;

Every word a distinct lie.

 

Your love used to make me melt;

Emanating from every fiber of your being.

Your love now makes me laugh;

Why? Because what I thought was true love,

NEVER WAS.

© 2009 MelissaRocksDuhh


Author's Note

MelissaRocksDuhh
I believe that I spelled mellifluous wrong. Sorry about that. Criticism is greatly appreicated :)

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This is amazing. It so sad, but in a way kinda happy because you realized what it never was. Love is such a hard thing and it is explained SOO well here, KUDOS!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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MelissaRocksDuhh
MelissaRocksDuhh

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I'm Melissa, and I promise you I'm not all that interesting. I'm 14, 9th grade, living in Florida. I play Clarinet in band. I do very well in school; My lowest grade is a High C and that is in Math, b.. more..

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