Foul Murder 3: Monster

Third poem to my series of poems Foul Murder

Mommy!
 I don't understand. Why is the room so quiet?
 Why is there ringing in my ears?
 Why is there red water surrounding you?
 Do you want me to clean up the ketchup for you?
 
Mommy,
I'm not going to get it of you don't tell me.
Are you okay?
Does is hurt anywhere?
Why aren't you breathing?
Why do you smell so bad?
Why are you so pale?

Mommy,
I think I hear the police sirens.
Maybe they can help!
Stay here Mommy!
I'm going to save you! I swear!
Wait...
Why is there a gun in my hand?

Mommy!
I'm sorry!
I didn't mean to shoot out your eye...

Mommy!
Why did you die?!
It's rude to ignore an invitation to a royal tea party.
Didn't you hear? If you do that...
The queen sends you to a death sentence...

Mommy!
I'm sorry!
I made your eye
go bye-bye...
Just like Daddy...
What's wrong with me, Mommy?
Am I a monster?
Like the monsters underneath my bed
and in your closet?

Yes...
Child...You are,
A monster.

Author's Note

Third piece to my Foul Murder Series. Please tell me anything on how to improve it, whether or not you like it...If it's original in any way...Anything. Be honest please!! Thank you. :)


Foul Murder 1: Foul Murder--- http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/MelodyPoet/985145/
Foul Murder 2: Killed By Hand---- http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/MelodyPoet/985157/

Reviews

[CHRIS ANDES]

quirky in a way but yes its originally a great piece
=]

[Melody]

:D Thank you. :)

[Fréyjä Helv..]

Oh my oh my oh my. Sweet demented murder. The flow was impeccable. I love it

[Melody]

:) Thank you. Lol

[Moon]

Haha ! Love it ! I am intrigued by dark writers such as yourself . Great job ! Keep up the good work . :)

[Melody]

Lol. You should read the 1st and 2nd ones if you haven't already, these babies are my pride and joys.lol

[Shadow Kat]

O.o Okay, I repeat... goodness...
Where do you come up with these things? Frightening, yet also kind of difficult not to find interesting.

[Melody]

I wonder that too. I have learned never to mention any of this to my mother...I think she's convinced I belong in a mental hospital now...:P
Thank you, Kat. :) Much appreciated.

[Shadow Kat]

Haha, wow. Well, we all have our imagination set on a certain area. :D
Your welcome. :)

[Melody]

True. :)