Secret admirer

Secret admirer

A Poem by Meraki

You paint me 
With your desires 
Color me like sin 
You're hiding so close 
Lurking in shadow 
Like a whisper in the wind

© 2014 Meraki


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I read this one several times... just for the full effect. It's subtle and potent. I love the way you've woven those two concepts together along with the interpretation of a secret admirer. It's very human, a very artistic set of lines.

100 whispering desires

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Meraki

9 Years Ago

Oh thank you that was really... wow that was a big compliment. Thank you so much



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I read this one several times... just for the full effect. It's subtle and potent. I love the way you've woven those two concepts together along with the interpretation of a secret admirer. It's very human, a very artistic set of lines.

100 whispering desires

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Meraki

9 Years Ago

Oh thank you that was really... wow that was a big compliment. Thank you so much

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 Added on June 10, 2014
Last Updated on July 29, 2014
Tags: Love, hiding, lingering

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Meraki
Meraki

Austin, TX



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