Mirrors

A Poem by Mary

I See her seeing herself,

I See her Frustrated,

I See her in vain,

Now she has her Heart Heavy,

Heavy enough to break me down,

She Lifts a stone,

And breaks me down.

Well nothing has happened to her,

but Her in Me,

Cracks seen all over her face,

Well,she doesn't realize; she is One.

Not many as she see's in me!

© 2016 Mary

Author's Note

Viewers please note The "I" here is being personified as The mirror. Hope u enjoy reading it!

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Rosewonders

Pretty deep reminds me a movie called Look Away did in this year your write reads just like the movie

Posted 5 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

5 Years Ago

Thank you. 😀

5 Years Ago

Welcome Mary

angel

I didn't realize when I first read this that "I" was the mirror.
That changed everything when I read it again.
That was an interesting angle--a new way of looking at things.
Very nice job, Mary!

Posted 5 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

5 Years Ago

Sir, thank you soo much for reviewing my poetry. It is inedeed great to have reviews from such exper.. read more

alanwgraham

You have taken a very clever idea and made a thoughtful and well executed piece of work out of it.
Well done!
Alan

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

8 Years Ago

Thank You Very Much sir!

Shreya

Now that's a very compelling and thought provoking poem. It sure is a reflection to the poet's heart. A mirror to oneself. Good work and may your fire breath eternally.

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much Shreya...means a lot.

Anindita Janhabee

At first, a bit confusing to understand but then, it was more understandable...
Very good thinking and well penned...
It really needs excellent thoughts to write such a heart-touching poem...
thanks for sharing...