The Dream

Drifting through the dark, night sky
on a soft white cloud.
As I'm drifting 
I see towns, cities, people , and creatures
all together right before my eyes.
The people are ants,
walking through the streets.
I look up overhead
and see a shooting star 
running through the sky.
Then I slowly go back down to my perfect place, home.
As I walk into my house 
everything is still and quiet. 
And I wake up to find out 
my adventure was a dream.

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems if any

Reviews

[Neon]

I love watching someone as damn gorgeous as you making grammar mistakes .. please keep on .. you look damn beautiful in mistakes because every angel looks beautiful more and more when she makes mistakes and when prince comes to give them praise...

...and i really don't think you made any mistake, resulting you became more beautiful coz, when angels don't make mistakes they become more beautiful and stunning looking .. as same as you.

I enjoyed the poem, your dream's too damn scented as same as your scent. Keep writing!

[Ayana Abraham]

I still don't know how you know what I look like because FYI the person in my pic is NOT me

[Neon]

What do you mean by that??
I didn't call ya beautiful seeing yer wallpic. I read yer stuffs and I got them stunning and I know your too beautiful.. coz.. if you write so much scented stuffs then no one can even imagine how beautiful you'd be.

[Ayana Abraham]

Scented? What do you mean by that...?

[Neon]

Don't ya know the word.. wow! What an amazing angel you are .. i loved it.. i love when someone as beautiful as you don't know the words and asks me to elaborate ..

Scented means beautiful as same as a flower's scent

[Ayana Abraham]

I ask a lot of questions... And ohh okay! Gotcha!

[Neon]

And I love when someone as beautiful as stunning as sizzling as damn and damn gorgeous as you ask me allot of scented questions with in her scented voice. So .. Don't ever stop asking ..keep asking and keep getting.

[Ayana Abraham]

Merci :) that's really sweet of you to say

[Robert James Parfett]

I think it's great that you are giving poetry a go when most 15 year olds would probably laugh at the thought. Keep it up.

[Ayana Abraham]

Hahaha. That is very true. Thank you so much!