One Day

One Day

A Poem by ForgottenGirl
"

Ill heal myself, one day.

"

Maybe not in the near future, but one day, I am gonna be better

This numbing blank feeling that I cling to now?

It will be gone.

After some time passes I will let go of you

I will let go of the anger and the sadness

I will let go of the hate and i will let go of what little love I have left

I will let it all go and you will be nothing but a distant memory

One day, i'm not sure when, but one day

You're gonna miss me.

You're gonna look back and the feelings I have now because you let me go

You walked away,

From what could have been one hell of a life.

This is all on you

And one day i hope you regret it.

© 2017 ForgottenGirl


Author's Note

ForgottenGirl
I am playing around with the idea of poetry, for I am no poet. I have yet to master rhyming so I know they do not have a good flow, but I am trying. I think it is important for me to keep trying and writing, so thank you for reading.

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MIAAAAAA!!! this is so beautiful and after we spoke today, i can feel the pain and heartbreak behind it even more. please keep focussing on your writing because there is true talent in your work. you have done so well and i am so proud of all that you are doing. this is definitely higher writing than other sixteen year olds produce and I am so glad that you wrote and shared this!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Any kind of writing can be a healing experience, as I well know. This, while being very personal and introspective, provides a wonderful positive attitude toward the future, as well as being just a tad bit terse. It is never all on one, for two are needed to "rumble." But, I do understand and commiserate with all the feelings here!

Posted 6 Years Ago


I like the sense of hope in this, that you may be broken but you will get through and the structure of the poem, in my opinion one of your best so far, loved it

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on July 26, 2017
Last Updated on July 26, 2017
Tags: Broken, heal, soon, time, love

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ForgottenGirl
ForgottenGirl

Roseburg, OR



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My name is Mia and I am 16 years old. I do not know much about life or this world. I know that like most teens I am hurt, confused, and lonely. My poems are not professional, and most may suck. Yet wr.. more..

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