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WOOT! spur of the moment poem <3

People say if you love something let it go,
If it loves you back it will come back and show,
How  much it cares,
That you are there,

I loved something,
My Dog,
He was my world,
I let him go,
Where is he now,
Gone forever,
Dead buried under the little log house,
Probably getting tormented by a mouse,

Maybe it doesn't apply to dogs,
Nor does it apply to my little frogs,
Just people,
Crazy and stupid people,

Well i guess it could be so,
I let a guy go,
He came running back,
But i didn't want him back,
Is that bad?

Well this all comes to show,
sometimes they don't always come back,
They just give up and go,
Leave it behind and next time give that person a smack.

(They deserved the smack right? For crawling back, after treating you like that?)

Reviews

[Alz Alz]

The rhyme and format was good... Kind of sad :'( good poem though, 100/100

[Joe]

This is a really good poem. I like the rhyming and the rhythm of the words and the formatting of it is really nice. Great job! Keep it up!