SunSpots

is staring into the sun a bad thing???

The morning's glory,

with all its splendor.

 

That god grace shines bright.

As winters chill,

lets you know your still here.

 

My mind drifts far away....

 

The memories flood.

With the crisp cold air,

that breathes with every blink.

 

With waves breaking,

in the lake thats just waking.

That the sun seems to warm skin,

like the heart living on this whim.

 

Only to realize that,

I've been left stranded in the sand.

Reviews

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Awesome job, dude! When I was reading it, I totally thought I was listening to a song. :p Seriously, this would make a great song! lol Lots of imagery, amazing flow, the works! Now, all you need is music. ;)

Thanks for sharing!

Eternally Yours.

[Victoria Harlequin]

"That the sun seems to warm skin,
like the heart living on this whim..."
Great job!

[just is]

I really enjoyed this, I can picture the write, wonderful write here.