Silenced Pains

aggrevated silence irritates me.....

The aggrevated pain,

that your silence creates...

Hasten's my mind to hate...

Wanting you to melt my heart,

that you trash my life instead...

Only to remember a time,

when you were mine...

Reviews

[fallen_sueanne]

My favorite line -> "Hasten's my mind to hate." Raw emotion that only some people are unfortunate enough to experience. This is very short, but I like it

[Mary]

"The aggravated pain, that your silence creates.." - powerful line...i think it expresses some deep emotional thought.

[StoryTailor]

i like it.

[~Shadow Kissed~]

i really like this one :)