She Was Very Strange, and Beautiful

She Was Very Strange, and Beautiful
by Michael R. Burch

She was very strange, and beautiful,
like a violet mist enshrouding hills
before night falls
when the hoot owl calls
and the cricket trills
and the envapored moon hangs low and full.

She was very strange, in a pleasant way,
as the hummingbird
flies madly still,
so I drank my fill
of her every word.
What she knew of love, she demurred to say.

She was meant to leave, as the wind must blow,
as the sun must set,
as the rain must fall.
Though she gave her all,
I had nothing left . . .
yet I smiled, bereft, in her receding glow.

Reviews

[Lea Sheryn]

A dramatically wonderful poem of a brief experience of love. Bravo!

[Michael R. Burch]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked my poem.

[Lea Sheryn]

You're welcome. I liked it very much.

[Curtis.Lenker]

This poem is simply beautiful. Very well written. Great write here.

[Michael R. Burch]

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment; it is very much appreciated!