Dying of Young Love

Dying of Young Love

A Poem by Night Owl
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This is a personal heartbreak, something that can shed light on heart break that will help get some pain off my chest.

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I loved you so, and with time love grows,
Flaked romance, Strumming my heart and melody beats.
Living the rhymes, hoping so high.
Poetic of times, flowing with words, we could never repeat.

Time shapes love, which grew so cold,
with everyday our passion grows old.
So insecure, too young to love, we never knew that we were enough.

Our hearts were align, but we moved so far
growing apart, dying, melodies chime.
So confused, never loved, just abused, 
intoxicating would love come to be.

Yet she never saw the best in me.
I gave what I could, I thought was my all, 
I should've gave more, 
Imagination's fall.

We can't speak, no longer see.
She never saw what we could be.
I never gave more, when I had all.
I'm sorry darling, for our faith so small.

© 2017 Night Owl


Author's Note

Night Owl
Ignore my incorrect punctuation! Sorry!
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Added on October 28, 2017
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Tags: #love, #sadness, #memory

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Night Owl
Night Owl

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I am a dreamer, an outcast, a lover, a strange past. My pen name, Midnight Owl, is what I feel expresses me the most without a given speech. I write the little ideas in the back of my mind.. more..

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