Borderline

Borderline

A Poem by Lauren Jones
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A Poem about what borderline personality disorder from an actual sufferer

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I’m on the line

Stretched thin between joy and sorrow

I’m all alone

Abandoned and devalued

I’m fire and water

Burning and drowning

I’m on the borderline

What is right?

© 2013 Lauren Jones


Author's Note

Lauren Jones
its short and written in about 5 mins. I didn't want to overthink and over analyze it and have it come out insincere

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I really love the tug of war in this piece. It's never one or the other, but you're always stuck with both feelings.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow, I Love it...these are usually the best poems when it flows out effortlessly...short, concise, and poignant.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Added on September 19, 2013
Last Updated on September 19, 2013
Tags: borderline personality disorder, bpd, borderline, psychology

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Lauren Jones
Lauren Jones

Sheldon, IL



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My name is Lauren Jones. I am an aspiring writer. I write purely fiction generally fantasy but I'm also working on a couple suspense novels. more..

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