Questions

Why do I question? What I know is so right.

Questions...

Why do I do this

Constantly loosing

Smoking Drugs and getting high

Only making me want to cry

I exhale and think about

All the times we'd mess about

I really miss you

Truly truly miss you

But I can't fathom the things you write

Your poems and photos

Break my heart

I'm dying to tell you

That this is hurting me

But I can't explain

Maybe its your escape

I'll never know, where is my fate?

Please work out that I'm not okay

Cause i'm struggling with what to say

I want to be the perfect couple

You keep me alive and want more

But all i see is double

not the drugs again

I need you to come and save me again.

Author's Note

Current situation with a girl.
Been loving music and emotionally distraught lately
Thought this might be a good place to write my rhymes and get some feedback.
Excuse the grammar and if it doesn't make sense, not a fan of the ending and Still young and struggle with english a heap.
Feel free to comment or msg for a chat about stories or your feelings.

Reviews

[12.09am]

This is a good first piece, I encourage you to read other peoples work in order to gain insight and inspiration, that's how i truly began. But this really speaks to me, i can relate to this alot :)