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A Poem by Dani
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Just something I felt.

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who are you to doubt me as much as I do myself

considering it's me you only think that I might need some help

Ready to shun me? That's ok cause I've already walked out the door

clumsily looking for a place where the last thing I'll be is ignored

Belive me when I say that you're wrong

cause when you turn around again I'll be gone to selected cities of my dreams

So I can finally be...

Even though my head is stuck in the clouds

I can use it to float out of town and see my future from below

If common sense is so affrodable then why hasn't it been dropped on my porch

I've at least waited four weeks I'm certian more

Something like this should be shipped on business days

But what's the point of complaining when it's still miles away

© 2008 Dani


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Added on February 11, 2008

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Dani
Dani

summerville, SC



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