V-Bite

Poem about us vamires

Vampires love to bite

you think you'll be all right

first you'll have dreams

there nightmares or so it seems

don't fall asleep

that's when we come to reep

you can run

but that makes it that much more fun

you can have a stake

but what difference will that make

we don't like the light

but it's fun to take flight

that's our story

but don't worry

we'll save you for last

we'll have a blast

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

Love this poem and its attitude.
Excellent rhyming.
You did a wonderful job on writing about vampires.

[TheActOfRandomness(:]

I really liked the rhyme scheme of this poem.
It flowed naturally, and I enjoyed it. :)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

This flowed wonderfully, very good at describing vampires.
Great Job

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Wonderful write here, I like the rhyme scheme as well, this is very well written and it flowed.

[Jessica Benfield]

nice! vampires are so awesome!!! *thinks about the awesome vampires in twilight... ahhhh... lol jk* nice, i like it =]

smiles,
jess

[Brittany DeFranco]

thats very good. Vampires are awsome, not all poems ryhme, I'm not saying thats a bad thing I'm just saying. But this is very good. Hope u write more poems and storys.
~Brittany ^-^