Potato chip

I'm only posting this to follow my own number one rule "if you wrote it, post it"

You're there each time I'm hungry
Or when i simply have the munchies

You always lead me to a smile
but every once in a while

i get one,
you know the kind
Its the one,
you forget to bite

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

haha...If you wrote it, you post it; I like that. I have a rule that I will write at least one piece per day, no matter if it's crap or not, so I can relate. This, however, was quite entertaining. I found a bit of interesting metaphor here, especially in the last stanza. Clever...I'll be back to read more from you.

[MikeV]

Thank you! :) i personally hate this piece :p
I'm gonna follow your rule too it sounds like a good one

[SyberRose]

I like the Tostito lime chips...i eat them everyday...cute one Mike...enjoyed as always...Rose:)

[MikeV]

Thank you, Rose :)

[Frieda P]

Ahhh so you posted the potato anywho....I like the one's that have a bubble in them, they've more crunch to them, try those next time MJ comes a'callin my friend :-P

[MikeV]

Lol what bubbly chips you eatin?

[Frieda P]

Lay's, Salt & Vinegar, nothing better when you're, haha you know! ;-)

[MikeV]

Yeah, lol i know, now I'm hungry :p

[Frieda P]

Ermahgerd already! lol

[MikeV]

Lol yep, mary jane is callin my name
and she makes me hungry ;)

[Frieda P]

What am I gonna do with you kid? ;-P

[MikeV]

I don't even know what I'm gonna do with me lol
but you can hope inspiration hits :p