Why?

Till now i wonder...what was my fault,
Why did everything come to a sudden halt.
Was it my bending down,
To your unjustified anger n frown.
Was it my apology when the mistakes were never mine,
To never leave you in lower potential n always make you shine.
Was it my love or care,
Or never saying"this isn't fair".
Was it my devotion,
That set things in motion.
Or was it something else entirely,
That made you hurt me so fiercely.
Why wasn't I sufficient.. Why wasn't I enough?
Why was your love a lie.. Your promises.. Just bluff...

Reviews

[Malvika]

yes it does hurt when we give so mush and get nothing in return not even appreciation.loved the poem .

[Mikku]

Thanks a lot

[Najam Us Saher]

You express your emotions very well. Loved the rhyme and the flow.

[Mikku]

Thanks a lot

[Najam Us Saher]

You're most welcome.