I love you

I love you

A Poem by Milinda_Moon
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A poem for my bf who makes me feel just so...wonderful!

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You can call me hon,

You can call me love,

You can even call me by my name.

But there's one thing you've always called me.

"Yours."

Even though we may fight,

Maybe even hate each other for a little while.

But I always know you'll be there for me.

But as I sit here in bed looking up at the stars

and think to myself.

"Maybe this is all but a dream,maybe I'll awake to find we've never met."

But as you hold me in your arms and whisper those sweet words I melt for.

"I cannot live without you. I need you in my life."

Then I finally feel the love I've been waiting for.

And I whisper the last words to come to mind before drifting off into sleep

"I love you."

© 2009 Milinda_Moon


Author's Note

Milinda_Moon
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Oh aww :)
I loved it. Such a great message- I liked how you made the word "YOURS" the center of this poem and ending it with "I love you."
Thing that I was a bit confused with was the first three lines.... maybe you can do something to clarify that?

Posted 14 Years Ago


Well, that was beautiful. Well done and simplistic.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Dil
Really quite touching, makes you smile just reading it to yourself.
You put a great image into my head, and I really believe you got your story/ point across.

Great Read~
:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on October 17, 2009

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Milinda_Moon
Milinda_Moon

Forks, WA



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My name is Bella and I'm sister's with Ali Bella. I'm 19 and I have a beautiful son. I'm an emotional poet and a stay home mother. My poems I write are very deep and sometimes dark and the kind of.. more..

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