Do you?

About a girl who's been hurt by someone she thought she loved a long time ago.

Does it hurt?
Does it hurt when she leaves?
Does it hurt when she says those words?
How deep does it cut?
Does it cut at all?
Do you know who she really is?
Do you know what she went through when she was younger?
What she's going through now?
Do you even care anymore?
She trusted you with her heart.
But you couldn't careless about her could you?
You watched as she laid there dying.
Did you try to help her?
Did you try to stop her?
Do you know what you've done?
Do you know what you've caused?
Do you know how it feels to be stabbed?
Like the way you stabbed her in the heart?
She tries so hard to forget you.
To forget all the damage you've caused.
All the things she went through.
But to her your just a spic of dirt she hates.
 Do you know what you've done to this girl?

Reviews

[there is no more from m..]

wow this was a very deep poem well done

[You Don't Know Me]

This reminds me so much of something I would have written way back when. It's really painful when you love someone with all of your heart, only to get nothing in return.

[Luna]

this is very deep and can happen. people fall in love, sometimes too easy, and it can end up a disaster. if something bad happens it's like the end of the world. this is very good.