The Sun

The Sun

A Poem by Victoria Chang

His eyes of midnight blue

widen in surprise

as the sky changed its hue

he saw the sun rise


Oh beautiful star

reflecting on the seas

Sapphires they are

contrasting emerald trees


Sphere of flame

whe you say good night

Moon, the dame

Shows up in sight

© 2010 Victoria Chang

Author's Note

Victoria Chang
Hope you can see what i see!!

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I love this poem. Very visual, and just pretty.

Posted 8 Years Ago

A good write that convines with simplicity and beauty.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Captivating imagery.

Posted 10 Years Ago

A lovely piece and beautifully penned
Thanks for sharing

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on July 27, 2010
Last Updated on July 30, 2010


Victoria Chang
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