Should know

Should know

A Poem by Millie
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just a breath little snipit of how i'm feeling :).xxx

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I'd wait until the night is over

Through the wind and the rain

As the weather chills

I keep the thrills

That we once shared

We share them until the end of time

Even though now we may be apart

i couldn't care not one bit

Because i know in my heart

Is where we'll stay

Stay until we're gone

Even though we may not still be

i want you to know i'd give up everything

just so you know how much i . . .

How much i always will . . .

Even though the words maybe 

Hard to utter through my lips

I can tell you this

The caring you said

And the caring i felt

They are and always will be

Two very different things

© 2011 Millie


Author's Note

Millie
yeah i know its not very good exspecially the grammer sorry .xxxxx

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grammer dont matter its what's written that does and it was great :-)


Posted 13 Years Ago


i like this a lot. it is good!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Hi there. Dont put yourself down. I like what you've written keep it up. You're right about the grammer though. Can you do me a favour and review my story please. Thanks. Bye.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on January 30, 2011
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Millie
Millie

Portsmouth, Copner, United Kingdom



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