Words i can't say

Words i can't say

A Poem by Millie

In my head i can say them

With perfect grammar and pronunciation

When close to you

They get lost in translation

I muble and stimble

Run away before damage can be done

I plan every word i may utter

Still every word i am unable to say

Is it me? Is it you?

Does it all get lost in translation

Words are still trapped

Unable to escape

The words i can't say

© 2011 Millie


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Millie
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Beautifully expressed ..... to be honest its all the game of words which we can utter and which we cannot seem to utter ..... really captivating .

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome poem, and I'm happy I can say those words!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I find this extremely able to relate to!
I love it!
The only thing I would work on is the spelling and grammar.
Haha, it mentions that up there!
Keep up the good work. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Millie
Millie

Portsmouth, Copner, United Kingdom



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