Those Blue Eyes

Those Blue Eyes

A Story by Millie
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Those soft loving blue eyes

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I layed my head oh his chest, the sun beaming down. I breathed deeply as he stroked my hair. My heart skipped beat when ever he touched me. I lifted up my hand to hold his. He grabbed my arm, it stung like the deepest depths of hell. A tear sprung up from my eye. I looked up to him as he held my wrist in his hand. Those glising blue eyes saddened. I saw little droplets of blood fall down my arm, he still didn't let go. I sat up straight, I looked into those blue eyes. He didn't understand why I did it yet he still hadn't let go.

© 2011 Millie


Author's Note

Millie
review please.xxxxx



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WOW! HunzZz Amelia this is amazin :O i didn't know you could write like this :O its amazing

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Added on March 26, 2011
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Tags: Romance, Love, Depression, Honesty, Pain, Hurt

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Millie
Millie

Portsmouth, Copner, United Kingdom



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I'm 16 (almost). I write to express conflicting emotions. This enable to let me release them without feeling like there mine by putting them in different scenarios. I enjoy writing, but music is m.. more..

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