Honey, Darling, Sweetheart

Honey,

Darling,

Sweetheart,

You know I didn't

Mean it.

Come on,

Now,

Don't cry.

Lover,

Sweetie,

Doll.

Please,

Baby.

We always make up.

Just give me a kiss.

Sugar,

Gorgeous

Angel.

Where the

F**k

Are you going?

Don't you 

F*****g

Leave again.

Honey.

Darling.

Sweetheart.

Author's Note

Hm. I don't like this one at all, but I wanted to write. This probably took me the longest to write of all of my poems, clocking in at about 10 minutes.

Reviews

[JelliFyshKissUs]

Ah...the never ending cycle of mental abuse filled my mind's eye as I read this. Funny how you don't care for it, but it is probably my favorite of your works. A simple transition that conjures up so many possibilities. This one speaks to me. Thanks for sharing it, even though you didn't like it.

[DrSprinkz73]

I could understand why you didn't like it but there's truth to it that makes it powerful in its own unique way and I like the real-ness of how you show "the duality of man"

[J. R.]

I love the passive-aggressive nature of this one.
It transitions well from affectionate to angry to back again.

it's saying something and then regretting it immediately after.
you start off cool and calm, trying to console the person you offended, then when they're unsure or don't accept the apologies, you lose your temper.
very good transition in the poem.