Don't judge a book by it's cover..

Don't judge a book by it's cover..

A Poem by Miss'LC
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Lavveeeeeeeeeeeit!

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Love me or hate me
Either way you aint me,
It's not what you get is what you see
For f**k sake, please don't judge me. 

I aint like every other girl.. 
That you get wrapped around your finger, 
Carry on your s**t, 
But i aint gonna linger.

Before you discuss me, and my life
Make sure you know me first. 
Dont  just guess the bright lights, 
I aint some girl you can just shag and forget 
Oh boy, no other girl will make you wet.

Don't Judge someone you don't know, 
Does it really matter if they're..
Really nice? Tall? Fat? Thin? or even a hoe?
Everyone is thier own kind 
Just leave them be,
It aint that f*****g hard, believe me. 

You don't their present or past
You don't know their history. 
So stop being such a prick
Let them have their victory. 

Telling them they're dickheads+s**t,
It aint even funny, 
The only dickhead round here, will be you. 
I'll make sure of that. 
Stop being tight, and let them live their life. 
With out a worry in hell, all is blown
Now listen here dickhead, just f**k off home. 

© 2011 Miss'LC


Author's Note

Miss'LC
It pisses me off when people judge.
This sort of went off side of the subject though
I'd prefer it more to be lyric to a rap then a poem, it'll mean more.

Don't judge a book by it's cover because in the end,
it'll be you that the bellend.

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wow this is incredible!! have u considered writing for slam poetry? or watever you wanna call it...jam poetry is another name. this flows so nicely, even with the harsh words, its a perfect blend of rhyme and rhythm, and I could feel ur anger. just amazing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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You channeled out your feelings so well!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You obviously enjoy writing and you have a nice flow to your language. But if I were you I wouldn't use bad language. You have the wonderful English langauge to work with and you will discover you can express ideas much better by choosing the right words to say them. With bad langauge you lower the tone of your work and and your own personal dignity. Think about it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lol I like this. Great format and portrayal of emotions..xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow this is incredible!! have u considered writing for slam poetry? or watever you wanna call it...jam poetry is another name. this flows so nicely, even with the harsh words, its a perfect blend of rhyme and rhythm, and I could feel ur anger. just amazing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

this is so m=nice
i loved this :D

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Miss'LC

Chichester, United Kingdom



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