Tears

Tears

A Poem by Dark Lady Phoenix

Have you ever wanted to just set and cry.

Not having a care and not knowing why.

The tears roll down your face and you just can't stop.

Your heart feels broken and you just want to rot.

Sob after sob and just let it go.

Your tears are unstoppable they just have to flow.

And after a bit you start to fill better.

You know you will be OK.

And you get your self together.

I say it's OK. Tears wash the soul.

Let it all out and your faith in your self

you'll always hold..

© 2010 Dark Lady Phoenix


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Dark Lady Phoenix
Do you ever just want a good cry?

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Yes, I do sometimes and you're right, often times I do feel better. I tell those I care for just go ahead and cry, wash the pain out, don't hold it end, you will feel better and can focus on the difficulty much better after that. Outstanding poem, well written and so true.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Good work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Crying can make you feel better but I always end up with a bad headache after wards.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The feeling at the beganing to me was kinda like, yes i want a good cry, the end was the feeling of it like, here it is

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes, I do sometimes and you're right, often times I do feel better. I tell those I care for just go ahead and cry, wash the pain out, don't hold it end, you will feel better and can focus on the difficulty much better after that. Outstanding poem, well written and so true.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I have cried like this many times. There are things that leave scratches on our souls and from time to time the resurface so letting it out and crying helps us to become cleansed in a sense and feel more refreshed. Wonderful job expressing this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes. When I want to cry I find my best friend.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yeah. I totally agree with the emotions that are mentioned in your poem. I believe nothing happens without a reason. Most of the time we swallow and take the beatings, that life has to offer. But there is a threshold to everything. So sometimes for small reasons (or without a reason) we start to cry. It is a natural process of human mind. I think of it in a positive way and yes ..
"Tears wash the soul.
Let it all out and your faith in your self
you'll always hold.."
Excellent poem!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Few spelling errors here and there but it was still a good poem. No I hate crying.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love this one baby :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Dark Lady Phoenix
Dark Lady Phoenix

Conroe, TX



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I'm a 37 year old house wife. I was hurt on the job in 2005 and now disabled. My writing is to me what keeps me going. I have a wonderful sweet husband that I love with everything in me. I hope you en.. more..

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