Unfaithful

 

 

 

My heart is burning and no one feels.  Put a smile on my face in front of them. Everyone leaves, and I just remember everyone is gone. Tired much of this world. They hurt us and just go. They always winners at their own game. We are always losers. You know why? Because our hearts are different from their hearts, we do not know what they are saying is that they book authors. We fall in love, we be honest with them at all, but they just leave. How this harsh life?!

Reviews

[Effector Prime]

It may be no doubt.. But had you known how trying it is for those on this side too, you would realise that it is the 'situation' that weighs the niche, and not men (or women for that matter). That's my take :) What an awesome write! You have great talent!

[Mo0onlight_UAE]

Thank you to read what I wrote. And Thank you for your encouragement. You made my day :)

[Effector Prime]

your welcome :)

[Emily]

I like the meaning of it!
Well done!!

[Mo0onlight_UAE]

Few words,but made me happy :)
Thank you so much

[W R Stowe]

We are only losers if we accept that what other people that don't know us Winning is only a state of mind

[Great Aunt Astri]

This sounds like the trials and tribulations of young love ... Oh, how I remember those days! And all the broken hearts! You put down your feelings very well Funnily enough life seems less harsh as you get older!
Keep on writing.

[Mo0onlight_UAE]

Thank you so much.

[John Anderson]

what an amazing and powerful write. I love your boldness and raw emotion here

[Mo0onlight_UAE]

Woohoo! You painted a smile on my face. Thank you for your comment :)