*insert title here*

I was heavily depressed once

I know that sometimes it feels like suffocating
all these problems that keep on complicating
but you know you gotta keep on operating
if you wanna get through

then one day you just wake up and realise
that the stuff you dream about and fantasize
do nothing but emphasize
the lonliness of you

and cuz you wanna stay positive and pure
you start looking for a potion or a cure
to keep you going and to help you endure
but it's just an illusion too

cuz where you come from there's no sunshine
there's you, the lonely you and the eternal time
facing your horrible dreams, waiting for you to climb
now it's only a matter of will you do.

Author's Note

waiting for a feedback :D as always :)

Reviews

[Saadia Missbahi]

wow, well that's someting,
great job ;)
keep up the good work bro

[lakki]

I really loved it.
'then one day you just wake up and realise
that the stuff you dream about and fantasize
do nothing but emphasize
the lonliness of you'

I couldn't get how dreams can form vaccum in one's soul, could you clarify it for me please?

[Chris]

I liked it a lot!
I can hear a beat in my head when I read it.