Two Peas in a Pod

A hopeful poem about relationship and love

You are the heart,

vital and alive with life.

I am a leaf in fall,

drifting with the tides of the mind.

You are purity of love,

mercy exemplified and

 i am critical thought,
severity in action.

You are the epitome of springtime,

A bountiful

 garden
of beautiful blossoms,

natures miraculous harvest.

 
I am the Sun, bold and aggressive,
harsh and focused,

while you are the Moon,
mysterious and reflective.

Together we are whole,

a flowing unity of opposites,

an interactive paradox

of neutralizing forces.

We are Maya you and I,
Not two, but one.

Together, we transcend the sum of our parts,

like neutron and,

 proton,
night and day,
negative and positive....

We are the colors purple and yellow,
blue and orange.

You are oceans of Ions,
nurturing and fecund,

the warmth and hope of dreams while I,

 the frigid calm of reality.

You and I are paradox personified,

day and night, up and down,
north and south, In and out.

WE are Oxygen, you and I,
finding stability in our trinity.

Together we are the music of the spheres
held together by the gravity of our interdependence
and the mutuality of our flesh.

We are the limitless emptiness of fulfillment.

 
Merged, we are two peas
in a shared pod of protective unity,
joined in spiritual matrimony;

an ideal fused in the universal mind's eye .

You and I are love in motion
and eternity in the now

We are two peas in a Pod……

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Such beautiful and strong language to make your point. I like the poem. It was fun to read and the movement was very good. When if we are lucky and find the person who make us complete. No better day in a life. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Ruth]

This is wonderful hon :)
So many lines I love in this, love is never simple, takes work, you have portrayed the ebb and flow well in this :)
A potent reach out towards the emotions happiness amongst the surrender and flaws!
xx

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

if this was a song itd be me and my mans/ absolutely beautiful

[Adelia Alighieri]

The title has always fascinated me, which was one reason I read the poem.
I like the structure, it's plain and easy. Beautiful emotions. Brilliant job.

[Abdul Aziz]

This is awesome to say the least. I loved all the paradoxes. "Opposites attract" might be a cliche, but it does hold true. The poem seems to bounce buoyantly between a restless her and a calm him. This poem is drenched with colors, with vibrant imagery, with intoxicating motion. I can simply not think of any which way this could have been better. Perfect write!
100/100

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

a simply gorgeous example of metaphysical love.. i think it is when we find our polarity in our loved ones that we truly begin to explore our own selves.. this line:
"I am a leaf in fall,

drifting with the tides of the mind"

cpativated me with the image it cast in my mind..

wonderful write..

[Awdures]

I adore the way you've encompassed scientific reasoning into the reason why two people should be together. I also like very much the way that you have thought about the layout and impact of the poem. Very clever work.

It's an intelligent yet touching write! :)

[Colleen]

A lovely sentiment....I enjoyed the way the poem broke apart at significant lines - it makes one concentrate on the message.

[FeliciaS (Poetic Prince..]

nice

[Liza]

this is a very supportive role in love
the definition is liberating
it does not suffocate but hold high
it was beautiful
it was my reading pleasure
thank you for sending the read request.

[Crowley]

This hummed along with a great rhythym, very beautiful images. I love the idea of the bond and the balance. Nice write.