Suicide

I am the girl that you wouldn't suspect,

The one who receives no real respect.

The girl who everyone decides to look on,

No one even thinking that something could be wrong.

I am the girl who can feel so low,

From just a couple of words, comments,

I bet you all know.

I am the girl who feels destroyed on the inside,

with constant tears that can never be dried.

I am the girl who fears you all,

The one who just wants to hide away and crawl.

I am the girl who discourages herself,

who shies away from everything else.

I am the girl who can't sleep at night,

from the nightmares that haunt me until morning light.

I am the girl who can't take it anymore,

Who held a knife behind a closed door.

I am the girl who took relief from pain,

But in truth didn't receive much gain.

I am the girl who wants to end it all,

but the one who still trys to stand tall.

I am the girl who has given up,

who has decided to not keep getting up.

I am the girl who committed suicide,

Who ended it all with a bottle of chloride. 

Author's Note

...I felt that this express' my inner thoughts.

Reviews

[Su' Nacnetaf]

I enjoyed reading this thoroughly, I'm a fan of rhyming poems and yours was really enjoyeable despite the subject being suicide. I hope this stays only as thoughts that may feed future great writings though. Thanks for sharing.